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Heat scalds, man sweats, screams, Eddie's voice echoes, brain freeze, Ice cream? Eddie's tease!

Red-shirted fellow,
Digging deep, hidden treasure,
Nasal expedition.

Pipes cling to the wall,
A family amidst concrete,
Beside the great pole.

This haiku and photograph is a disaster, It lacks any poetic master, The theme of pipes is quite bland, And the imagery doesn't expand. The words used are all quite basic, With no depth or meaning to the basis, It fails to paint a vivid scene, And lacks any true beauty!!!!!!!