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I have had these song for a bit now. I wrote one for both of my girls "Song of Love" and one for each of the girls. Addi was very much into alternative rock so I wrote "Oh Addi,( our precious child)" in the alternative style. I'm almost finished with Kristina's song. I will publish it as well.
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(Verse 1)
In the depths of despair, where shadows lingered near,
A tale of sorrow unfolds, a life cut short, so unclear.
Her name was Addi, a vibrant light in our lives,
But fate took her away, leaving us with shattered ties.

(Chorus)
Oh Addi, our precious child, now a star in the sky,
Your memory forever etched, as the tears we can't deny.
Though you're gone, your spirit lives on, in every breath we take,
We'll sing your song, we'll carry on, for your love will never break.

(Verse 2)
We remember your laughter, the joy you brought each day,
But destiny had plans, and it led you astray.
The pain cuts deep, like an endless abyss,
But we'll hold onto the memories, the moments we'll never miss.

(Chorus)
Oh Addi, our precious child, now a star in the sky,
Your memory forever etched, as the tears we can't deny.
Though you're gone, your spirit lives on, in every breath we take,
We'll sing your song, we'll carry on, for your love will never break.

(Bridge)
But in the darkest nights, we feel your presence near,
A whisper in the wind, wiping away our tears.
We keep your flame alive, in our hearts you'll forever shine,
For you, dear Addi, our love will always intertwine.

(Guitar Solo)

(Chorus)
Oh Addi, our precious child, now a star in the sky,
Your memory forever etched, as the tears we can't deny.
Though you're gone, your spirit lives on, in every breath we take,
We'll sing your song, we'll carry on, for your love will never break.

(Outro)
So here's to you, Addi, though you've left this earthly plane,
We'll honor your existence, amidst the sorrow and the pain.
In this alternative rock anthem, we'll forever remember your name,
Addi, our beloved daughter, your spirit will forever remain.